Essay Audit
A holistic review of your scholarship application bundle, returned as written constructive feedback with an action plan.
Book My Essay Audit NowThis is not a proofreading service
If you are looking for grammar fixes and better wording, use another service. This one looks at the content of your essay holistically.
What the audit does
- ✓ Reads the whole bundle as one application, not as separate files
- ✓ Looks at the content of the essay holistically
- ✓ Checks whether the motivation letter, CV, and reference letter tell the same story
- ✓ Suggests which stories and angles are worth telling, and which ones are not landing
- ✓ Returns written constructive feedback
- ✓ Includes an action plan you can work from
What it does not do
- × Proofreading grammar, typos, and punctuation
- × Changing wording to make it sound better
- × Rewriting or writing the essay for you
- × Translating documents
One package is one bundle
Say you are applying for Scholarship A. One package holds everything you will send to that scholarship.
Draft motivation letter
The version you have now.
Draft CV
Any format.
Draft reference letter
If you already have one.
Other supporting documents
Anything else you plan to submit with the application.
Two kinds of submissions
Already submitted
A package you sent before and did not win.
Not submitted yet
A fresh draft you are not sure about.
How it works
- 1
Message Rahma on WhatsApp
Rahma is Rosi's manager and handles every booking. Name the scholarship and the deadline, and she will give you the price.
- 2
Send one complete bundle
All documents in a single submission.
- 3
Rosi reads it
Three to seven working days, depending on the case.
- 4
You receive written feedback
Constructive feedback and an action plan, sent to you by email.
Advice from Rosi
Write as originally as you can
Text written by AI is recognisable at a glance, and there is little point in auditing it.
People who use AI well still end up with writing that reads naturally.
FAQ
▸ What can be submitted?
One bundle of your scholarship application: motivation letter, CV, reference letter, and the supporting documents that go with it.
▸ How long does the feedback take?
Between three and seven working days. Straightforward cases can be done in under three days. Difficult ones take up to seven working days. The timeline is agreed with Rahma in the chat.
▸ What if the essays are for two scholarships?
Two scholarships count as two packages.
▸ How much does it cost?
Rahma, Rosi's manager, gives the price over WhatsApp.
▸ Can a booking be cancelled?
Make sure your draft is ready before booking. Once the payment has gone through and the draft has been sent, the booking can no longer be cancelled.
▸ Can documents already submitted and rejected be reviewed?
Yes. You can send a package you already submitted and did not win, or a fresh draft you have not submitted and are unsure about.
Prefer to talk it through live? Book a 1-1 Consultation instead. Applying for the Swedish Institute scholarship? The SI Scholarship Playbook walks you through the whole cycle before the drafting starts.
Before the panel reads it
A selection panel reads your application once, and quickly. This is your chance to have it read slowly first.
Book My Essay Audit NowEssay Audit is an independent service from Sejuta Cerita Muda and is not affiliated with any scholarship provider. It cannot guarantee a successful application. What you receive is written feedback and an action plan. The revisions are yours to make.